| | Preliminary | Draft 1 | Draft 2 | Draft 3 | Draft 4 | Final Draft | Evaluation |
| Mark __/60 Level | N/A | 21/22 Level: 1 | 24 Level: 2 | 25/26 Level: 2 | 27/28 Level: 2 | | |
| WWW | · over the shoulder shots · costume · 180 rule | · gesture · make up · facial expression | ·nice point of view shot | · build up of a storyline · mise en scene · connotations | · moods ·exaggeration ·gesture ·time passing by ·connotations | | |
| EBI | · variety of shots · use a tripod to film · characters gestures | · more about bipolar · wider range of shots · music · combine pace with mood | · disorder its not clear · jumping cuts · characters are unclear to the storyline | · more still long shots · no zooming · no music on titles · wider range of shots | · more exaggeration · music to go with the different moods · shots of different parts of body | | |
| Filming/ Editing Targets | · no zooming · use match on action · | · shaky camera · no zooming · no earthquake effect | · hallucinations · could do more with the shots · voiceovers | · wider range of shots · titles – timed | · use tripod · shots still shaky · no zooming · cutting pace | | |
| Changes (decisions and revisions) | N/A | · more about bipolar · create a storyline | · get rid of characters · music · establish more emotions | · work out the timing · divide into different moods (bipolar) · exaggeration | · music · wider range of shots · pace with moods · longer shot of her death | | |
Thursday 5 May 2011
Progression of each draft
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