In Draft 3 we changed completely our idea, we finally had one storyline, which established the basics symptoms of bipolar. In this draft I've learned about acting, as I'm not very used to it, I had to act and mainly be exaggerated on my emotions.
Group Level: 2 Group Mark: 25/26
Individual Effort/Contribution: Level 3
Individual Mark: 26
WWW in Draft 3:
- Build up of a story line
- Mise en scene
- Connotations
Targets to Improve:
- More still long shots of parts of her body
- Don't use the same song to the whole sequence
- Do not cut the shots too fast, longer shots
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