Overall Experience:
During producing the second draft, I have learned about being realistic with the time, as for example, we had flashbacks but the actors were wearing the same costume, which cannot happen. Also about our voice over, personally I think that we should have inserted a music background for it, because it gave a sense of empty and incomplete.
Individual Effort/Contribution: Level 3
Individual Mark: 24
WWW Draft 2:
- Satisfactory range of shots
- Point of view shot (circle)
- Location (isolated/empty park, perhaps establishes how lonely she is)
Targets to improve:
- Music - uncomfortable silence during the sequence
- Memory - different costume, setting etc
- Establish more about bipolar, go in depth on the symptoms
- Hallucinations - unclear
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