Short Term Plan Draft 3

DATE/DAY	EQUIPMENT NEEDED	LOCATION	ACTORS/COSTUMES PROPS	SCENE DESCRIPTION
Sunday 27/03/11	·   Camera ·   Tripod	Rafaella’s House, Kensal Green, London	·   Lucy ·   Cushions ·   Papers ·   Phone + earphones ·   Gun ·   Black Leggings, green t-shirt and navy blue cardigan	Lucy in her room, during an ordinary afternoon, time passing by and she is constantly changing moods.

Draft 2 Reflection

Overall Experience:

During producing the second draft, I have learned about being realistic with the time, as for example, we had flashbacks but the actors were wearing the same costume, which cannot happen. Also about our voice over, personally I think that we should have inserted a music background for it, because it gave a sense of empty and incomplete. 

Group Level: 1/2    Group Mark: 23/24
Individual Effort/Contribution: Level 3 
Individual Mark: 24


WWW Draft 2:

• Satisfactory range of shots 
• Point of view shot (circle) 
• Location (isolated/empty park, perhaps establishes how lonely she is)

Targets to improve: 

• Music - uncomfortable silence during the sequence
• Memory - different costume, setting etc
• Establish more about bipolar, go in depth on the symptoms
• Hallucinations - unclear  

Opening Sequence Draft 2

Short Term Plan Draft 2

DATE/DAY	EQUIPMENT NEEDED	LOCATION	ACTORS/COSTUMES PROPS	SCENE DESCRIPTION
Sunday 20/03/11	·   Camera ·   Tripod	Harrow Road and Park,  Kensal Green, London	·   Lucy + 2 of her friends ·   Phone ·   Black Leggings, green t-shirt and navy blue cardigan	1.   Lucy meeting with her friends, at a busy road 2.   She comes to the bus stop to meet with one of them, again, and she is ignored” 3.   Lucy comes to the park, to think about her life and she has flashbacks and hallucinations.

Draft 1 Reflection

Overall experience:
While filming the opening sequence, I've learned about continuity, which we need to keep the props in place for every single scene. Also while editing, I've learned that I've inserted many effects, which made the audience a bit confused. What we would improve and set as our targets, is that we need to have a constructed idea to directly show the audience our message. 

Group Level: 1       Group Mark: 22/23
Individual Effort/Contribution: Level 3
Individual Mark: 22

What Went Well in Draft 1?

• Mise en Scene - Gesture, Make up, Costume, Expressions, Lighting, Setting
• Shot of character holding the camera (pratical extension)
• Music really emphasises emotions (drama genre)

Targets to improve:

• Show a lot more about bipolar (research)
• Wider range of info/details about this behaviour
• Need to re-think - current idea doesn't tell what we're trying to say
• Develop pace (start slow, and gets faster, to create tension)
• Wider range of shots

Opening Sequence Draft 1

Short Term Plan Draft 1

DATE/DAY	EQUIPMENT NEEDED	LOCATION	ACTORS/COSTUMES PROPS	SCENE DESCRIPTION
Sunday 06/03/11	·   Camera ·   Tripod	Rafaella’s House, Kensal Green, London	·   Lucy ·   Gun ·   White t-shirt and jeans	Standing in the bedroom, very emotional, crying and very desperate