Draft 4 Reflection

Overall Experience
Draft 4 was very similar to Draft 3, the only thing that I've learned more is about lighting, on my opinion, we should have focused more in closing the curtains, as the sun was very bright on that afternoon.


Group Level: 2       Group Marl: 27/28
Individual Effort/Contribution: Level 4
Individual Mark: 27/28


WWW in Draft 4:

• The equally time given for each mood
• Still shots are longer 
• Mise en scene 

Targets to Improve:

• Music
• More exaggerated facial expressions
• Props/Costume

Opening Sequence Draft 4

Short Term Plan Draft 4

DATE/DAY	EQUIPMENT NEEDED	LOCATION	ACTORS/COSTUMES PROPS	SCENE DESCRIPTION
Sunday 10/04/11	·   Camera ·   Tripod	Rafaella’s House, Kensal Green, London	·   Lucy ·   Cushions ·   Papers ·   Phone + earphones ·   Gun ·   Black Leggings, white t-shirt and navy blue cardigan	Lucy in her room, during an ordinary afternoon, time passing by and she is constantly changing moods.

Draft 3 Reflection

Overall Experience:
In Draft 3 we changed completely our idea, we finally had one storyline, which established the basics symptoms of bipolar. In this draft I've learned about acting, as I'm not very used to it, I had to act and mainly be exaggerated on my emotions.


Group Level: 2       Group Mark: 25/26
Individual Effort/Contribution: Level 3 
Individual Mark: 26 


WWW in Draft 3: 

• Build up of a story line
• Mise en scene
• Connotations 

Targets to Improve:

• More still long shots of parts of her body 
• Don't use the same song to the whole sequence
• Do not cut the shots too fast, longer shots 

Opening Sequence Draft 3

Short Term Plan Draft 3

DATE/DAY	EQUIPMENT NEEDED	LOCATION	ACTORS/COSTUMES PROPS	SCENE DESCRIPTION
Sunday 27/03/11	·   Camera ·   Tripod	Rafaella’s House, Kensal Green, London	·   Lucy ·   Cushions ·   Papers ·   Phone + earphones ·   Gun ·   Black Leggings, green t-shirt and navy blue cardigan	Lucy in her room, during an ordinary afternoon, time passing by and she is constantly changing moods.

Draft 2 Reflection

Overall Experience:

During producing the second draft, I have learned about being realistic with the time, as for example, we had flashbacks but the actors were wearing the same costume, which cannot happen. Also about our voice over, personally I think that we should have inserted a music background for it, because it gave a sense of empty and incomplete. 

Group Level: 1/2    Group Mark: 23/24
Individual Effort/Contribution: Level 3 
Individual Mark: 24


WWW Draft 2:

• Satisfactory range of shots 
• Point of view shot (circle) 
• Location (isolated/empty park, perhaps establishes how lonely she is)

Targets to improve: 

• Music - uncomfortable silence during the sequence
• Memory - different costume, setting etc
• Establish more about bipolar, go in depth on the symptoms
• Hallucinations - unclear